For this post I’m going to assume you all agree that one of the main purposes of fiction writing is to make the reader feel, if you don’t think this please tell me why, I’m keen to hear your answer. As a writer I certainly want you to connect with my characters and feel everything they feel. To make this happen I need to deal with emotions and that can be a tricky thing, especially if I haven’t personally felt those emotions or at the other end of the scale if I have felt those emotions intensely.
As a writer I look at everything around me as a potential source of creativity and I’m constantly observing. It’s a weird observing though, I miss some of the most obvious things yet zero in on the tiniest details. This goes for emotions as well as the physical aspects.
One of the ways I try to express an emotion I haven’t felt before is to examine it and how I think it feels. For me personally this is usually in some form of poetry. Disclaimer: I’m not a poet, I write what feels right to me so feel free to say it isn’t actually poetry but I don’t know what else to call it.
Below is something I wrote last week and it was in response to how I thought someone else might be feeling.
Goddess of the Dark
Goddess of the dark
Hear my plight
I wish to leave my mark
But I’m afraid of the night
The darkness and shadows
The maybes and unknowns
All ring alarm bells
And I feel all alone
My sistas call to me
Voices crystal clear and true
But my ears are deaf to them
My mind coloured blue
I want to explore
Be the adventurer of my dreams
But something is holding me here
I struggle to be free
My cords are tangled
Snarled and a mess
Goddess help me
I don’t feel blessed
Now I don’t feel like this, although I have felt something similar in the past but not this intense. I showed it to two people close to me and both asked me if I was OK straight away, concerned for my well being. After reassuring them I was feeling great I counted this as a success and feel confident that I can convey this emotion in my novel.
The next piece of writing is how I was feeling at the time and oddly enough I’m way too close to it to actually judge its success. It is a true representation of emotion for me, but I am unsure if others can tell what I was trying to convey.
For Breath
Gasping I wake
The weight on my chest imaginary
But too real to fake
I struggle to sit
Go about my day
But my lungs hold a protest
So back to bed I go
Heat pack for comfort
Heart low
I fight to hide it
But one look and she knows
Worry a pit at her feet
I’m miserable
My body not responding how I want
But it’s my life
At least I have one
I gasp for breath
It’s easier and I smile
This time my body is strong
This time I don’t need to fight
For breath.
So that’s how I examine emotions that I want to show in my stories. I focus on them and how I think they make people feel. Everyone is different so it can be a tricky thing to get across but it is my job as a writer to make the reader understand what my character is feeling. To do that I need to understand who and what my character is but also how a reader identifies with certain emotions. Smiles for joy, tears for sadness etc. are obvious ones. These pieces of writing allow me to dig a little deeper and hopefully make the emotional connection between the character and the reader a strong one.
How do you deal with emotions in your writing? Please let me know in the comments, I’m interested to hear of other ways of writing about them.
Happy creating everyone!